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All I see is RED
Deep inside my head
Tinged with black
All emotion, no fact
No words, just wind
Screaming
And whoosh-whoosh-whoosh
Blood pounding red
RED!
Scarlet in my head
Dig my nails into my face
Pain to hold my place:
Anchor in a sea of screaming dead
Fade back into reality
But now burned into memory
That is was red,
RED
:iconbelinda-rikku:

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Written on 2/15/2009

Written after and inspired by.... a meltdown. Lol. Also, Duma Key, though I didn't notice that until after the fact...

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:iconfervensmortis:
wow. that is really good. the rhyme scheme and just the way it flows. its great

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LIFE Is Paradoxically Coincidental To The Ironical Tyrrany Applicable To The Unparalleled Definition Of Reverse Entropy
:iconbelinda-rikku:
Aw, thank you. ^-^;

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Aspie pride ~AspieAuty
This place is always such a mess
Sometimes I think I'd like to watch it burn
I'm so alone, and I feel just like somebody else
Man, I ain't changed, but I know I ain't the same
:iconfervensmortis:
of course :)

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LIFE Is Paradoxically Coincidental To The Ironical Tyrrany Applicable To The Unparalleled Definition Of Reverse Entropy
:iconfur-was-es-wert-ist:
very nice poem.
Duma Key is wonderful, no?

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"No wonder they call it the Nutcracker!"
:iconbelinda-rikku:
Thank you.
And yeah, it is.

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Aspie pride ~AspieAuty
This place is always such a mess
Sometimes I think I'd like to watch it burn
I'm so alone, and I feel just like somebody else
Man, I ain't changed, but I know I ain't the same

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